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Subject: My views
   
   I disagree to the view that professional success is hard to achieve without
   sacrificing essential aspects of personal life. Instead, I contend that
   professional success is the result of fine balence between personal and
   professional life. Let me present some arguments to suppport my position.
   
   Many researches conducted to evaluate the importance of satisfying pesrsonal
   life in professional success have found that most of the successful people
   have great personal life. These reserchers have shown that a satisfying
   personal relationship encourages to take bold decisions and go extra mile.
   
   Take, for example,former US President Mr. Bil Clinton. The way Mrs. Hillary
   Clinton stood with him in his troubled times  made Mr. Clinton to publicaly
   acknowledge her role in his	successful professional life.
   
   Secondly, many people think that professional success requires plenty of
   time. And, those who wish to become succesful have to put a lot of time and
   effort at the cost of their family life. I agree to this but only to an
   extent. In my opinion,what constitutes the essenttial aspects of personal
   life is a subjective thing. For example, one person may get satisfaction in
   being with his wife while other person may get satisfaction in holding a
   business meeting or mentoring his subordinates. The latter being personally
   satisfying and professionally rewarding.
   
   In conclusion, I agree that professional success requiers much time and
   effort but it is the fine balence between professional and personal life
   which makes one successful.	 

Posted at: Thu Aug 9 02:29:31 2007 (GMT)

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From: anniejain83Reply 1 of 1Reply
Subject: professional success hard to achieve without satisfying personal life
   > 
   > I disagree to the view that professional success is hard to achieve
   > without sacrificing essential aspects of personal life. Instead, I
   > contend that professional success is the result of fine balence between
   > personal and professional life. Let me present some arguments to suppport
   > my position.
   > 
   > Many researches conducted to evaluate the importance of satisfying
   > pesrsonal life in professional success have found that most of the
   > successful people have great personal life. These reserchers have shown
   > that a satisfying personal relationship encourages to take bold decisions
   > and go extra mile.
   > 
   > Take, for example,former US President Mr. Bil Clinton. The way Mrs.
   > Hillary Clinton stood with him in his troubled times  made Mr. Clinton to
   > publicaly acknowledge her role in his successful professional life.
   > 
   > Secondly, many people think that professional success requires plenty of
   > time. And, those who wish to become succesful have to put a lot of time
   > and effort at the cost of their family life. I agree to this but only to
   > an extent. In my opinion,what constitutes the essenttial aspects of
   > personal life is a subjective thing. For example, one person may get
   > satisfaction in being with his wife while other person may get
   > satisfaction in holding a business meeting or mentoring his subordinates.
   > The latter being personally satisfying and professionally rewarding.
   > 
   > In conclusion, I agree that professional success requiers much time and
   > effort but it is the fine balence between professional and personal life
   > which makes one successful.   
   >

Posted at: Wed Nov 14 06:30:27 2007 (GMT)

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